申请故事 | 文书线上集训丨赶早不赶晚,跟资深导师一起写ESSAY啦!

2020-04-17 11:04 盖普国际教育



为了帮助同学们更好挖掘自己,Emma老师、资深外籍顾问以及文书顾问们将继续和大家一起,通过有趣的活动,带领大家进行头脑风暴,带给大家别开生面的分享,正式启动申请文书,欢迎有兴趣的童鞋(10-11年级)报名,开启认识自我,呈现自我之旅!

2020多事之秋,准留学生们的备考节奏大受影响,预计暑假可能缩短,并要花大量时间备考SAT等。这就意味着留给文书的时间会更少,而文书是达到申请门槛后最重要的录取决定因素。


提起文书,各位家长第一反应往往是问我“文书多不多?好写吗?要多少时间?”坦白说,每当这个时候,很多孩子们还不知道文书题目处于懵懂状态,而作为八年文书顾问的我都要很无奈但也有必要提前告诉大家:虽然因人而异,但是整体难度不小,时间预留越充分约好。2020年,为了更合理的安排申请,提高早申请录取几率,也为标化留足时间,盖普的Essay Workshop将于3.28号拉开序幕~

文书线上集训丨赶早不赶晚,跟资深导师一起写ESSAY啦!

敲黑板:文书的核心是自我认知(如兴趣特长性格,经历如成功失败挑战,或直白或委婉展示价值观等),题目都是直击灵魂的哲学问题,比如common essay(我们常说的申请主文书)就在回答:我是谁?;经典的补充文书题目也是:我从哪里来,要到哪里去?更有甚者,每年以脑洞清奇而著称的芝加哥大学补充文书,让部分同学直接选择放弃申请,但也有个别同学确认过眼神更加坚定自己的选择。所以我把芝加哥大学2020 Fall入学申请的补充文书列出来,希望能给各位童鞋和家长一些思考和启发哦~
文书线上集训丨赶早不赶晚,跟资深导师一起写ESSAY啦!

Essay Option 1

Cats have nine lives, Pac-Man has 3 lives, and radioactive isotopes have half-lives. How many lives does something else—conceptual or actual—have, and why?—Inspired by Kedrick Shin, Class of 2019

Essay Option 2
If there’s a limited amount of matter in the universe, how can Olive Garden (along with other restaurants and their concepts of food infinity) offer truly unlimited soup, salad, and breadsticks? Explain this using any method of analysis you wish—physics, biology, economics, history, theology… the options, as you can tell, are endless.—Inspired by Yoonseo Lee, Class of 2023

Essay Option 3
A hot dog might be a sandwich, and cereal might be a soup, but is a ______ a ______? —Inspired by Arya Muralidharan, Class of 2021 (and dozens of others who, this year and in past years, have submitted the question “Is a hot dog a sandwich,” to which we reply, “maybe”)

Essay Option 4
“Fiction reveals truth that reality obscures.” – Jessamyn West—Inspired by Elizabeth Mansfield, Class of 2020

Essay Option 5
UChicago has international campus centers around the world, but we don’t have any interplanetary, interstellar, or interdimensional campuses… yet! Propose a spot in time or space, in this or any universe, for a new UChicago campus. What types of courses would be taught at this site? What cultural experiences await students who study there?—Inspired by Peter Jasperse, Class of 2022

Essay Option 6
“Don’t be afraid to pick past prompts! I liked some of the ones from previous years more than those made newly available for my year. Also, don’t worry about the ‘correct’ way to interpret a question. If there exists a correct way to interpret the prompt I chose, it certainly was not my answer.”—Matthew Lohrs, Class of 2023


本着冒险求索的精神,学生也可以选择芝加哥大学过往任何附加文书题目或者自立题目,所以我也列出了部分经典【简单】文书题目展示给大家,enjoy~

What’s so odd about odd numbers?—Inspired by Mario Rosasco, AB’09

How are apples and oranges supposed to be compared? Possible answers involve, but are not limited to, statistics, chemistry, physics, linguistics, and philosophy.—Inspired by Florence Chan, AB’1

Dog and Cat. Coffee and Tea. Great Gatsby and Catcher in the Rye. Everyone knows there are two types of people in the world. What are they?—Inspired by an anonymous alumna, AB'06

How did you get caught? (Or not caught, as the case may be.)—Inspired by Kelly Kennedy, AB’10

University of Chicago alumna and renowned author/critic Susan Sontag said, “The only interesting answers are those that destroy the questions.” We all have heard serious questions, absurd questions, and seriously absurd questions, some of which cannot be answered without obliterating the very question. Destroy a question with your answer.—Inspired by Aleksandra Ciric


乍一看,这些题目确实是异想天开,唯有有趣的灵魂才能解锁,那我们如何应对呢?其实老师相信——

每个人都有至少一面或者多面

比如上一届Essay Workshop,有讨论敏感主题示弱的硬核干部Ella(ED录取全美Top 3 Wellelsey College),有挖掘出擅长湘菜的宝藏男孩Jerry(录取全美Top 29北卡教堂山),舞台表现力和哲思气质的Christine(ED录取Top 29 NYU),思考自己到底是不是从垃圾桶里捡出来的温暖但“戏剧味”十足的酒窝男生Kevin(工程专业Offer拿到手软),一念之间拯救她人后重新认识自己的Angelina(ED录取杜兰还有一年两万三的奖学金),等与众不同的独一无二的学长学姐。招生官也想看的是学生最真实的“人”,在校的学生群体需要的是能一起学一起玩的小伙伴,远不止申请表格上填写的信息。还是老问题:我是一个什么样的人我的灵魂在何处?

文书线上集训丨赶早不赶晚,跟资深导师一起写ESSAY啦!

为了帮助同学们更好挖掘自己,Emma老师、资深外籍顾问以及文书顾问们将继续和大家一起,通过有趣的活动,带领大家进行头脑风暴,带给大家别开生面的分享,正式启动申请文书,欢迎有兴趣的童鞋(10-11年级)报名,开启认识自我,呈现自我之旅!

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